Labios de un Green Eyed Angel by Alicia Blond101 [TL]

Grettings.
You aren't Spanish, no? I'm sorry, but I'm Spanish and I not understand nothing. I suppose you used Google Traductor for this fiction, no? Sentences are poorly constructed, and the Guidelines of this page request a good grammar and others rules of the English or Spanish lenguage.

Finally I inform you that your history is being criticized in "Los Malos Fics y Sus Autores". Remove the spaces for acced.

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I was tryong something new. I've seen other enhglish author's do different
languages and I enjoy seeing foreign readers even though I know I won't be
able to see what the reviews really mean.
Yes I did use the transfer and I don't see how people in English could like it
and understand it in English, but you can't get it from Spain. I even had a
flamer say it was good.
I don't want to sound mean, but I just started this I don't think you need to
be so rude when this is my first time and I don't want a get a spanish/english
reader because other authors have done that end of getting their stories
stolen from other foreign readers or the transfer takes all the credit. I'll
look over it yet and with my beta reader, but I'm English, I don't know how
you type stories in Spain or Mexico, but I just used the transfer.